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Post by NOT OASISLIVEFOREVER on Mar 12, 2005 18:19:45 GMT -5
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Post by NOT OASISLIVEFOREVER on Mar 13, 2005 13:39:26 GMT -5
17 of u have looked, not one response
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Post by cigsandbooze on Mar 13, 2005 14:20:45 GMT -5
Ok, this is constructive criticism so don't take it personal. It all needs to be tightened up a bit. The bass and guitars need to coincide better. The vocals need some work. The singer should make it his own song, it is damn near impossible to sound like a young Liam. Other than that, it is a pretty good go at it.
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Post by NOT OASISLIVEFOREVER on Mar 13, 2005 14:46:44 GMT -5
thanks cigzandbooze, some criticism is better then no criticism.
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Post by soquester on Mar 13, 2005 19:46:53 GMT -5
I'm gonna be honest dude... I don't like it at all... The rhythm seems really out of time to me, and there's something really weird with the guitar(s)... Like there's two tracks, and one does the regular rhythm and the other is doing it way the hell up the neck, which sounds not so good in my opinion...
The singing needs work too... He sorta cuts off his vocals at the end of each line (as if he ran out of breath or something...). They need to be a little smoother...
Main thing to work on though is timing, it sounds like everyone's playing at a slightly different time...
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Post by SamJacent on Mar 13, 2005 20:39:41 GMT -5
I'm really sorry guys, i know how it feels to be slagged off like but its awful, might sound like a vagina mate but its really bad, the vocals are awful. i dunno whether youve tried to make it your own song or you just dont know how to play it but the chord leading into the chorus is C#7 and if its not it sounds good enough for me.
also the chorus is D, A, E, F#m
also the guitar solo which i suppose would be decent enough behind a rhythm section sounds too complicated, Noel Gallagher isnt about hard complicated solo's he keeps it simple and melodic. you to practice, practice, practice, practice.
i know its hard been slagged off but if you feel youre good enough to post youre material on the net you should be ready for this, the singer quite literally needs 'To Be Himself' cause he cant no-one else, honestly.
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Post by NOT OASISLIVEFOREVER on Mar 13, 2005 20:49:06 GMT -5
thanks for the feedback. for the singing, i dont know how to sing it anyother way, but as for the solo, we tried to make that our own and not copy the song, just like we didn't use the drum intro. i appreciate the criticsm, and i'm happy that people replied in a respectful mature manner, (as in NOT saying, "you guys suck balls, give it up")
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Post by SamJacent on Mar 14, 2005 7:20:10 GMT -5
reading back i think i was very harsh sorry pal, but if your trying to be so original wouldnt the easiest option be to write your own tunes, but just take an oasis influence
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Post by Mr Sifter on Mar 18, 2005 10:48:17 GMT -5
My first reaction was.......its bloody awfull.
However so are some of Oasis's early Demo's compared to the final live / studio versions...........
The key is practice and confidence.
And when it comes down to it this is a start in the right direction, so fair play for your efforts!
Nice one.
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Post by Currian on Mar 18, 2005 18:39:01 GMT -5
Nice ska type of music. Horrible vocals, OMG I just filtered that out. It's even better when I sing myself.
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