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Post by Deleted on Feb 1, 2016 16:10:52 GMT -5
Here's an acoustic demo of one of the first song I have written. The lyrics may be not totally correct and the sound is very shitty, but I'd like to hear some opinions or some advices by some of you
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2016 16:59:46 GMT -5
Tried to record it an other way, it doesn't work though.
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Post by glider on Feb 2, 2016 17:23:16 GMT -5
This is good stuff man, you sound a bit like Mark Gardener from Ride!
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Post by The Escapist on Feb 2, 2016 18:22:21 GMT -5
Very nice, I clicked expected something really cringeworthy but that's not bad at all!
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Post by Cast on Feb 2, 2016 23:00:46 GMT -5
Keep going! Keep writing. I'm definitely getting acoustic Ride vibes. Good job
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Post by boneheadsbolero on Feb 3, 2016 1:53:45 GMT -5
Son, 30 years ago I was where you are now. My advice is this. Get a Tascam porta-studio. Get a drum machine. Get an electric guitar. You can bluff the bass parts by playing said electric guitar directly through the board and EQ it so it's very low end (never directly inject guitar parts though, it sounds like crap when you do). Practice practice practice! For the first year your stuff will be weak but that's okay cuz you don't wanna waste your good stuff before you know how to truly work the porta-studio (bouncing down tracks etc). That takes time. Ever listen to Noel's pre-Oasis demos? They're all crap. He thinks they were good but he was wrong. They're not. But he kept at it and eventually figured out what he was doing. So too can you! My first batch of 20 or so songs were utter garbage. Once I got my sea legs I realised it and erased all but one or two of the least sucky ones.
Good luck! Have fun with it. I did.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 3, 2016 10:36:33 GMT -5
Wow, thank you very much for the kind comments and advices. I really appreciate it . Ride is one of my main influences along Oasis, The Stones, The La's, The Beatles, and so many others.
I keep writing and working hard to impove myself at songwriting.
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Post by Flatulence Panic on Feb 3, 2016 15:11:42 GMT -5
Very nice. Although a text message or something interrupted the recording at 1.26. The title reminded me of:
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Post by Deleted on Feb 3, 2016 15:37:41 GMT -5
Very nice. Although a text message or something interrupted the recording at 1.26. The title reminded me of: Yes, it was a text message ahah
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Post by Deleted on Feb 17, 2016 7:13:18 GMT -5
My new demo, "The Day of Karl Spensson" in average quality.
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Post by keke on Feb 19, 2016 12:18:14 GMT -5
i liked your demos and oasis covers too, after listened second demo i can say, it's getting better man!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2016 17:47:47 GMT -5
i liked your demos and oasis covers too, after listened second demo i can say, it's getting better man! Ahah thanks a lot guy The second demo I have posted, is one of my favourites I've written so far. I keep writing and trying to improve at songwriting.
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Post by World71R on Feb 20, 2016 23:02:49 GMT -5
Very nice. Although a text message or something interrupted the recording at 1.26. The title reminded me of: Yes, it was a text message ahah I legitimately thought my iPod was going off since I had it beside me while I was listening, until I looked down and saw no notifications, and then saw this comment. Nice demo! I can definitely hear the Oasis influences working their way into your writing. It's a good little song and a nice start. I like the second one you posted a little bit more. That has a really interesting melody to it and the song goes to some neat places. Good job.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 21, 2016 6:48:50 GMT -5
Yes, it was a text message ahah I legitimately thought my iPod was going off since I had it beside me while I was listening, until I looked down and saw no notifications, and then saw this comment. Nice demo! I can definitely hear the Oasis influences working their way into your writing. It's a good little song and a nice start. I like the second one you posted a little bit more. That has a really interesting melody to it and the song goes to some neat places. Good job. Thanks for giving your opinion Glad you liked it
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Post by Noel's Nose on Feb 27, 2016 21:04:48 GMT -5
I really like your songs, especially the second demo, though you could take up some classes if you want to improve your singing. I see lots of potential.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2016 12:13:54 GMT -5
I really like your songs, especially the second demo, though you could take up some classes if you want to improve your singing. I see lots of potential. Thanks a lot for the kind comment, man
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