SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
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Post by SuperSeb on May 29, 2006 10:14:26 GMT -5
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Post by RnRstar on May 30, 2006 3:45:36 GMT -5
Sounds good!!! sounds VERY kinksy... sounds a bit like dead end street
theres a bit that sounds like the beatles - i'm still sleeping too
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SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
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Post by SuperSeb on May 30, 2006 5:57:58 GMT -5
Thanks man I actually wrote this song after I had listened to some Dirty Pretty Things songs...but then I listen tot the Kinks and Beatles a lot as well lately...and I thought it was a bit TIOBI influenced as well...mainly the structure of the song, I'm almost done with recording a decent demo, so I'll post it here a.s.a.p.
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Post by Shakermaker on May 30, 2006 12:30:31 GMT -5
Hey seb !
I think you've got a great tune here. Haha what I see is that your lyrics more and more are based on those of The Kinks. Those " story about a ..... " songs. I think this one is cool but somehow try to find some new way of writting lyrics.
For this song this lyric is good! But try to find some other ways ... Listen to Lennon's solo songs. Or these songs 'round the time of Sgt. Pepper and Magical Mystery Tour. More psychodelica :-). Deeper meanings, that would be cool, and I know you can do that! Or Ryan Adams. Or King Of Convinience are writting lyrics that I think are some that you like and are a bit in your style.
For the chorus of this song i think you really need a BANGING one. And maybe this song would sound cool when it's played electric with a full band. Oh, and uhm, I got ourselfs a new gig in Leiden the second thursday of Juli, we are playing together on the same night with " Saving The Radio " . Well cheers and speak to you soon ! MAD FER IT !
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Post by consequent on May 30, 2006 16:30:15 GMT -5
sounds good mate I'll save the comments for the final version though
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SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
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Post by SuperSeb on May 30, 2006 17:57:27 GMT -5
@ Shakermaker: thing about the lyrics is that I've written plenty of songs which have a deeper meaning (Sad Memories, Paradise Uncensored, She Leaves Her Day, Mr.Time, Going Home (though that one's pretty straight forward, but it's got a meaning ) and I've got a couple of unfinished ones) and sometimes I just have to write about well...things like this I've got only 2 songs which have the "story about a" element. And I hate to say this, but the 2nd thursday of July, that's the 13th right? If so...then I can't do the gig as I'll be in Portugal by that time... I agree on the chorus needing to be banging...and it would be a lot better with a full band...I'm still not sure about the chorus I have at the moment...it's not long, but it's...well...you'll hear
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