SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
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Post by SuperSeb on Sept 18, 2005 3:01:36 GMT -5
Here's an original song, it's again an older song, but I re-recorded it. I'm still not sure if it's like I want it to be, but I thought that I'd post it anyway as it is now. It's called She Leaves Her Day and it's probably one of the hardest songs to sing that I've written, well, only the end is hard to sing ;D www.savefile.com/files/4554380Hope you like it!! - SuperSeb
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Post by Eggy on Sept 19, 2005 2:50:52 GMT -5
i will have a very critical listen to that just a sec
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Post by Eggy on Sept 19, 2005 3:30:57 GMT -5
the link doesnt work
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SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
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Post by SuperSeb on Sept 19, 2005 3:35:51 GMT -5
Hmm, weird, well anyway, here's another link: www.savefile.com/files/4554380And there's a little cut off transition between the string-section part near the end (when it goes from "just won't work anymoooooore.....I keep on swimming..." for the last time), so I will fix that soon enough, but anyway, here it is ;D
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Post by Eggy on Sept 19, 2005 4:22:45 GMT -5
good song man!
i was listening and thought that it would be great when you added a string section at the background, but seconds later they were there already!
start reminded me of drug dont work, but the rest didnt. your voice is good, but maybe you need to add some background vocals.
once again, great song man. keep on keepin on
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SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
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Post by SuperSeb on Sept 19, 2005 8:18:57 GMT -5
Hey thanks for the comments I have been thinking of doing backing vocals on it, but I'm afraid that it will ruin it for some reason
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SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
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Post by SuperSeb on Sept 20, 2005 2:32:25 GMT -5
Anyone else?
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Post by slideinbaby on Sept 20, 2005 3:13:06 GMT -5
thats awesome dude sounds very morrisey like! maybe cut her down 1 or 2 minutes keep ya wanting more anyways i cant judge love ya work!
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Post by Shakermaker on Sept 22, 2005 1:59:43 GMT -5
Hey man, As I told you, your voice comes out the best in these kind of songs. This song sounds brill, and I think if you (we) find some more bandmembers, this song will become huge ! I'm quit sure we will find the rite people for our band. Absolutley top ! Keep it up, and write some more brilliant songs Noel , .... uhm Seb !
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SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
Posts: 247
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Post by SuperSeb on Sept 22, 2005 2:35:39 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback guys!! I think that this song can get mega as well with a full band....so we'd better start searching then ;D
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SuperSeb
Oasis Roadie
Did you ever wonder why they've put satellites in the sky?
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Post by SuperSeb on Sept 23, 2005 1:32:56 GMT -5
Are there more people willing to give some feedback?
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