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Post by Jabasso on Mar 27, 2005 21:00:41 GMT -5
Okay, this a new song of mine that I just recorded and I want to know what you guys think as I respect your opinions on music. It's called Fall to Fate. Now, please listen to the WHOLE thing, as I believe that I need to redo the vocals on the first part as I don't think it captures immediate attention like I want it to. Anyway, I think that I did it quite well since this is all take one. I'm gonna re-record it all for a final version but I just wanted to see if you like what I'm doing here. s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=01YIUSJ2W2VPP0H4TUM14GV1I9It may take a while to DL as it's a wave, but please do. I really need some input here. Good or bad. Thank you all. Oh, and just FYI, I do copyright all my songs.
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Post by Jabasso on Mar 27, 2005 21:28:34 GMT -5
Ten views and no "Okay, I'll give it a listen."? C'mon guys, please tell me what you think. Good or bad, I just want to know.
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Post by lionsden® on Mar 27, 2005 21:37:42 GMT -5
Ten views and no "Okay, I'll give it a listen."? C'mon guys, please tell me what you think. Good or bad, I just want to know. I'm u/l right now Lisyen to my old bands song on the Question title on this thread
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Post by Jabasso on Mar 27, 2005 21:46:53 GMT -5
I'm u/l right now Lisyen to my old bands song on the Question title on this thread Nevermind. I found it.
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Post by lionsden® on Mar 27, 2005 21:49:29 GMT -5
I don't understand. Do you mean that it's in a post titled "Question" in the Blue Note section? yeah - Title of topic is question I'm listening to yers now
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Post by lionsden® on Mar 27, 2005 21:55:24 GMT -5
could be good - Your voice needs to be in tune with the chords a bit more if you know what i mean. When you sing "fall to fate" i think there could be a change in the notes (chords you play) I have something in mind, but i'll have to get the guitar out and play it. I'll pm you what i think. I like the lyrics and with a little fine tuning it can be a great song
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Post by Jabasso on Mar 27, 2005 21:59:16 GMT -5
could be good - Your voice needs to be in tune with the chords a bit more if you know what i mean. When you sing "fall to fate" i think there could be a change in the notes (chords you play) I have something in mind, but i'll have to get the guitar out and play it. I'll pm you what i think. I like the lyrics and with a little fine tuning it can be a great song Thanks! And that's why I'm a guitarist/songwriter (like Noel) instead of a vocalist. I'm listening to yours now and will post in your thread. Anybody else?
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Post by lionsden® on Mar 27, 2005 22:01:10 GMT -5
Thanks! And that's why I'm a guitarist/songwriter (like Noel) instead of a vocalist. I'm listening to yours now and will post in your thread. Anybody else? i think people look at the threads and then never actually d/l the songs
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Post by Jabasso on Mar 27, 2005 22:05:46 GMT -5
Yeah, you would think that they would know what they're getting into just by the title. Oh yeah, on a scale of 1-10, where do you think Fall to Fate falls (no pun intended)?
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Post by lionsden® on Mar 27, 2005 22:16:00 GMT -5
Yeah, you would think that they would know what they're getting into just by the title. Oh yeah, on a scale of 1-10, where do you think Fall to Fate falls (no pun intended)? lol a 6 right now - like i said with some changes could be an 8
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Post by Jabasso on Mar 27, 2005 22:17:07 GMT -5
Okay, please PM me with your suggestions then!
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Post by lionsden® on Mar 27, 2005 22:19:27 GMT -5
Okay, please PM me with your suggestions then! yeah i will - thers no crazy tuning on that song i don't think cos i was playing along with it be tommorrow with more of my tunes
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Post by pizzy on Mar 28, 2005 7:22:24 GMT -5
you need to tune your voice up before I can judge it properly... you'll get there
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Post by Jabasso on Mar 28, 2005 17:49:55 GMT -5
you need to tune your voice up before I can judge it properly... you'll get there That's why I'm not a singer. I don't know about all that.... So aside from that, what did you think?
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Post by pizzy on Mar 28, 2005 18:02:18 GMT -5
It sounds like a good tune to me, but like I said it's impossible to judge how good it is if it's not in tune... don't give up on your singing though, if you keep practicing, sing along to other songs, do some vocal scales along with your guitar scales and eventually your voice should tune up
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Post by Jabasso on Mar 28, 2005 18:16:23 GMT -5
It sounds like a good tune to me, but like I said it's impossible to judge how good it is if it's not in tune... don't give up on your singing though, if you keep practicing, sing along to other songs, do some vocal scales along with your guitar scales and eventually your voice should tune up Okay, if there's hope for my singing ability I'll give it a shot. That way I don't have to worry about giving a vocalist a cut of the money! ;D
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