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Post by johnnyrotten on Sept 12, 2020 20:26:38 GMT -5
Hello everyone, was hoping to get some feedback on a song I started writing the other night, if you could spare 3 minutes, give it a listen and let me know, thanks!
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Post by johnnyrotten on Sept 13, 2020 12:24:17 GMT -5
Re-recorded and added a few guitar bits and piano.
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Post by underneaththesky on Oct 19, 2020 19:56:33 GMT -5
sounds good - but the song needs fresh lyrics SONG and YOUNG should never be a rhyme (and it appears twice)
keep it up
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