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Post by RyanWiddo on Jun 12, 2017 10:34:53 GMT -5
hi, ive just recently joined a band so been writing songs for about 2 weeks now, I recorded them rough to show of the songs , bare in mind I'm not the singer so please excuse my voice , any feedback is appreciated My SoundCloud
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Post by Deleted on Jun 12, 2017 11:37:38 GMT -5
Good on you for being willing to share your stuff, mate. Overall I really enjoyed listening to some unknown guitar driven tunes. There are a few things that mention though...
- There is a heavy Oasis influence on the strumming and chord progressions... it's not bad at all, just glaringly obvious to a fan.
- The lyrics didn't do much for me, and felt rushed a lot. Less words may help to draw out a better understanding. It often sounds like the song is struggling to give space to your words.
- Weak choruses make the songs hard to get thru.
- I do see the potential in these tracks though.
- And I think it's great that you have so many already.
Keep up the good fight. Do what you love. Don't let nobody's, like me, get you down.
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Post by RyanWiddo on Jun 12, 2017 11:56:32 GMT -5
Good on you for being willing to share your stuff, mate. Overall I really enjoyed listening to some unknown guitar driven tunes. There are a few things that mention though... - There is a heavy Oasis influence on the strumming and chord progressions... it's not bad at all, just glaringly obvious to a fan. - The lyrics didn't do much for me, and felt rushed a lot. Less words may help to draw out a better understanding. It often sounds like the song is struggling to give space to your words. - Weak choruses make the songs hard to get thru. - I do see the potential in these tracks though. - And I think it's great that you have so many already. Keep up the good fight. Do what you love. Don't let nobody's, like me, get you down. cheers so much for the feedback! I didn't know but the songs I feel 'lesser' have gone to the top of my page, I think my best are 'what she said' and 'she's so pretty' not saying they are great but I like them best haha, serious though cheers for the advice just gunna keep cracking on, suppose you just get better with practice on lyrics. I find it hard to write a good chorus haha makes you realise what a genius noel is with big chorus's
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