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Post by Deleted on Jul 18, 2016 15:18:12 GMT -5
Drunk At Vince's - Musically it's lovely. My only gripe is the buried vocals. I have no idea what the song is about outside of the title.
Twins - Same ^.
I guess if lyrics mean nothing then it's fine, but I personally would like to know what you're on about. The music is pleasant enough. The recording quality is great. Just mix the vocals in better.
If that doesn't interest you, then why have vocals at all, right?
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Post by jordan71421 on Jul 18, 2016 16:50:51 GMT -5
Drunk At Vince's - Musically it's lovely. My only gripe is the buried vocals. I have no idea what the song is about outside of the title. Twins - Same ^. I guess if lyrics mean nothing then it's fine, but I personally would like to know what you're on about. The music is pleasant enough. The recording quality is great. Just mix the vocals in better. If that doesn't interest you, then why have vocals at all, right? Thanks for the feedback! Yeah my biggest problem is mixing the vocals. I'm already really insecure about my voice so I tend to bury it in the mix much deeper than I should. I have to grow out of that and just put it out there.
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Post by jordan71421 on Jul 19, 2016 18:42:20 GMT -5
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Post by jordan71421 on Jul 19, 2016 20:56:54 GMT -5
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Post by Mean Mrs. Mustard on Jul 20, 2016 10:06:47 GMT -5
This is a section of the forum which I don't visit often. I know I should. So I promise I will listen to this later today.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 20, 2016 11:02:31 GMT -5
I really like the dreamy atmosphere of that last song jordan71421 . Good job !
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Post by batfink30 on Jul 20, 2016 11:12:38 GMT -5
Sounds good,reminds me of a band I've got round to listening to again recently,Teenage Fanclub. Thumbs up from me :-)
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Post by Lennon2217 on Jul 20, 2016 11:17:02 GMT -5
I'm digging the two songs I heard. Both have that dreamy pop rock thing going on. Reminds me of a New Jersey band called Real Estate. A good thing! Keep it up.
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Post by mystoryisgory on Jul 20, 2016 19:26:17 GMT -5
These songs are great! Love the dreamy and ethereal vibes and I can hear the Marr influence in your guitar playing. Only thing is that your vocals could be higher in the mix. Even Andy Bell and Ian Brown had to make their voices audible, eh? What you could do is leave the existing vocal track the way it is but with more reverb and layer another (louder) lead vocal track over it. Hopefully that'll result in a double-tracked effect that'll enhance the psychedelic qualities!
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Post by jordan71421 on Jul 20, 2016 22:35:53 GMT -5
Thank you all for the feedback so far! it really helps
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Post by lamboasis on Jul 21, 2016 7:57:38 GMT -5
I like them musically, but the vocals are a bit buried as someone else said! If you can record a song properly with a proper mixing
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Post by jordan71421 on Jul 21, 2016 20:36:31 GMT -5
I like them musically, but the vocals are a bit buried as someone else said! If you can record a song properly with a proper mixing Thanks for the tip!
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Post by jordan71421 on Jul 26, 2016 21:08:52 GMT -5
new song coming soon...
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Post by jordan71421 on Jul 31, 2016 20:21:02 GMT -5
Here's a preview of my new song coming out real soon!
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Post by keke on Aug 1, 2016 5:01:16 GMT -5
that guitar is incendiary
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Post by jordan71421 on Aug 1, 2016 16:48:35 GMT -5
that guitar is incendiary Thank you! It's the heaviest song I've written so far and I'm really excited to put it out there when I'm finished with it!
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Post by jordan71421 on Aug 4, 2016 20:09:11 GMT -5
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Post by jordan71421 on Aug 5, 2016 20:04:44 GMT -5
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Post by Mean Mrs. Mustard on Aug 6, 2016 1:27:03 GMT -5
Not bad, not bad. Have listened to all of them now as I had completely forgotten about it, despite having promised to listen. Sorry.
I dig the sound, the guitars sound really good. Nice guitarsolo on your new one. I basically have the same criticism for all of them, but it's been said before: the buried vocals. It sounds like someone is singing along to a backing track, but that someone is like, 2 rooms away, in the shower.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2016 3:02:10 GMT -5
jordan71421 I like the sound of this one. I can see how "Gas Panic!" inspired you, even if your song is a bit less dark. Good guitars again aswell
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Post by keke on Aug 6, 2016 12:25:48 GMT -5
the first part it's kind of reverse layla, piano part first then guitars. all guitars are smells indie, and keyboards are compatible with guitars too. are you inspired on keyboards, layla, tiny dancer and some phil collins? can't decided which part is better intro or outro more great. well for me it's great to composition to switch moods in nearly 7 minute. didn't bored that long. well what i didn't like; vocals, i mean not your voice but sounds and echo also it's bridge 2:47-3:00 didn't like this sound a bit annoying, it would be nice if you add some piano or maybe some guitar additional works which is you best on it. from part to whole it's good composition. good job
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Post by mystoryisgory on Aug 6, 2016 13:37:01 GMT -5
Nice! Great atmospheric vibes! Though I would've liked to hear a bit more of your voice, both in terms of volume (I did notice you made your vocals more prominent, but maybe a touch more would be better? ) and throughout the song. Here's an idea: perhaps you could reprise the opening piano riff later in the song with some subdued "la la la"'s mimicking the melody? Could add a nice element to the song. Keep up the good work!
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Post by jordan71421 on Aug 6, 2016 19:09:36 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback so far guys! I think I have to ditch all the reverb, it's just too distracting
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Post by lamboasis on Aug 8, 2016 5:26:49 GMT -5
Yes, I think a "plain" voice would have been better on this one! really Nice job though!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2016 7:26:02 GMT -5
Sorry for the delay... I've been off grid for the weekend.
I like it. The music is great. Good vibes. There is a nice groove going on here.
Maybe make the back half build to something. Start out low and build to a climax. The music here is lovely, but it kind of goes nowhere until the end. Or do just the opposite... have the music crash back in then fade over a couple of minutes.
I'm not sold on the vocal or lyrics. Might have to give them another listen.
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