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Post by flashbax812 on Jun 11, 2004 15:32:51 GMT -5
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Post by Columbia on Jun 12, 2004 16:18:12 GMT -5
buy a guitar tuner
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Post by maketradefair on Jun 12, 2004 16:20:53 GMT -5
your voice isnt bad and your lyrics seem quite good. but your guitar playing is awful.
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Post by daysleeper on Jun 12, 2004 22:23:12 GMT -5
i can't really make out your lyrics too well...
maybe you could post them?
I'd turn my speakers up in an effort to understand them better - but in all honesty i'd rather not hear that guitar again...
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Post by flashbax812 on Jun 13, 2004 0:33:40 GMT -5
really, ok, well the guitar is really out of tune and is even strung incorrectly..... ill buy a tuner and record again.
Thanks for listening to everyone
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Post by flashbax812 on Jun 13, 2004 0:34:51 GMT -5
Oh yeah the lyrics:
It's a poem I wrote recently....
Falling Asleep
Sleep has sought my soul to plunder On this good afternoon Came it did but still I wondered Come not it could more soon?
Arriving with unsteady pace The drowsy feeling came My conscious mind laid bare to waste My muscles sore the same
As it came it drown my thoughts I fell onto the ground Retreat I did to what it brought Asleep without a sound
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