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Post by martinpaul on Aug 14, 2019 10:30:12 GMT -5
"Needs Noel to write a chorus"
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One Of Us
Aug 14, 2019 10:33:48 GMT -5
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Post by LlAM on Aug 14, 2019 10:33:48 GMT -5
Prediction:
Intro (Minimal guitar or piano) Verse (Promising melody and strong lyrics) Bridge (sounds like it's copy-pasted in) Chorus (With cliché lyrics and standard "Whatever-ish" chord progression) Verse (Cringe lyrics compared to first verse) Bridge (sounds like it's copy-pasted in again) Chorus (Same as first one but repeats the last line a few times) Middle 8 (Shoe-horned in, possibly with angry lyrics) Bridge (sounds like it's copy pasted) Chorus (Same one as the first one) (ends straight after the chorus with no ad-lib or outro just Liam's vocals singing the last line that ends with "one of us")
Edit: I forgot to mention it'll feature some sort of "unusual" instrument to make it sound interesting (mouth organ, slide guitar, "HEY!"... Maybe a banjo this time?)
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Post by pliolite on Aug 14, 2019 10:38:06 GMT -5
"The Beat Goes On is better than this." Nothing could beat that song's anthemic wonder. One day people will be singing it in stadiums.
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Post by pliolite on Aug 14, 2019 10:40:04 GMT -5
Prediction: Intro (Minimal guitar or piano) Verse (Promising melody and strong lyrics) Bridge (sounds like it's copy-pasted in) Chorus (With cliché lyrics and standard "Whatever-ish" chord progression) Verse (Cringe lyrics compared to first verse) Bridge (sounds like it's copy-pasted in again) Chorus (Same as first one but repeats the last line a few times) Middle 8 (Shoe-horned in, possibly with angry lyrics) Bridge (sounds like it's copy pasted) Chorus (Same one as the first one) (ends straight after the chorus with no ad-lib or outro just Liam's vocals singing the last line that ends with "one of us") You've bought a copy of Andrew Wyatt's Songwriting Masterclass??
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Post by LlAM on Aug 14, 2019 10:40:25 GMT -5
"The Beat Goes On is better than this." Nothing could beat that song's anthemic wonder. One day people will be singing it in stadiums. It's not the end of the World, It's not even the end of the day 😎
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One Of Us
Aug 14, 2019 10:40:44 GMT -5
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Post by LlAM on Aug 14, 2019 10:40:44 GMT -5
Prediction: Intro (Minimal guitar or piano) Verse (Promising melody and strong lyrics) Bridge (sounds like it's copy-pasted in) Chorus (With cliché lyrics and standard "Whatever-ish" chord progression) Verse (Cringe lyrics compared to first verse) Bridge (sounds like it's copy-pasted in again) Chorus (Same as first one but repeats the last line a few times) Middle 8 (Shoe-horned in, possibly with angry lyrics) Bridge (sounds like it's copy pasted) Chorus (Same one as the first one) (ends straight after the chorus with no ad-lib or outro just Liam's vocals singing the last line that ends with "one of us") You've bought a copy of Andrew Wyatt's Songwriting Masterclass?? 😂😂
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Post by Deleted on Aug 14, 2019 10:48:22 GMT -5
“Goes on a bit, should’ve been 0.00000000765 seconds shorter”
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Post by Lennon2217 on Aug 14, 2019 11:01:59 GMT -5
Did Andy Fucking write this thing?!?!?!?
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Aug 14, 2019 11:05:58 GMT -5
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Post by elephantstone93 on Aug 14, 2019 11:05:58 GMT -5
"This the one for Miley Cyrus?"
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Post by Plantpot on Aug 14, 2019 11:41:59 GMT -5
"Way too many 'na-na-na's'"
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Post by thomaslivesforever on Aug 14, 2019 11:58:52 GMT -5
"This the one for Miley Cyrus?" "That was rejected by Bieber"
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Aug 14, 2019 12:21:15 GMT -5
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Post by The-Ghost-Dancer on Aug 14, 2019 12:21:15 GMT -5
Sounds to Lennon-y and not in a good way
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Post by Lennon2217 on Aug 14, 2019 12:23:39 GMT -5
Liam’s songs are either very Lennon or very Ringo.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 14, 2019 12:25:15 GMT -5
"Did Andy Bell write this?"
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Post by MONO on Aug 14, 2019 12:27:05 GMT -5
"He should write his own songs."
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Post by Deleted on Aug 14, 2019 12:29:14 GMT -5
“He seems depressed in this video, he’s got that look in his eyes”
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Post by Flashbax on Aug 14, 2019 12:35:04 GMT -5
One (Of Us)
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Post by leron on Aug 14, 2019 12:39:24 GMT -5
Guys wow I had the chance to do an interview with liam and at the end of the interview his band, Richard ashcroft and Daniel Craig came out and put one of us on a 90's stereo. Wow, it sounds a bit like kinks/queen/avicii Very lennon, I wouldn't be surprised if this is going to be the next James bond theme
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Post by Lennon2217 on Aug 14, 2019 12:41:20 GMT -5
Guys wow I had the chance to do an interview with liam and at the end of the interview his band, Richard ashcroft and Daniel Craig came out and put one of us on a 90's stereo. Wow, it sounds a bit like kinks/queen/avicii Very lennon, I wouldn't be surprised if this is going to be the next James bond theme If this was 2004, all those wanna be Oasis fan sites would have posted article quoting your statements as facts. Miss those days.
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Post by captaincrankshaft on Aug 14, 2019 12:50:23 GMT -5
All jokes aside, the chorus is actually lifted from the song by whatshername “what if god was one of us, just a slob like one of us, tryin’ to make his way home’. Obviously directed at Noel.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 14, 2019 13:01:53 GMT -5
I saw you in Stone Island earlier Andy, eating crisps, singing in the changing room. Couldn’t hear what you were singing but it went kinda “Wonce, Wonce, Wonce.” You were trying on parkas, they suited you, you looked well unsophisticated. Definitely a closet parka monkey. Oh and btw, you’re so lucky to share your name with an amazing songwriter. Andrew summat summat, his surname escapes me now.
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Aug 14, 2019 13:06:08 GMT -5
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Post by glider on Aug 14, 2019 13:06:08 GMT -5
"Lad shite."
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Post by Rolo on Aug 14, 2019 13:08:49 GMT -5
Will laugh if it actually turns out to be complete shite now. (cry).
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Post by idleross on Aug 14, 2019 13:22:07 GMT -5
I wouldn’t rate Shockwave, The River or Once any higher than a 7 so fingers crossed One Of Us breaks the spell.
One Of Us and Why Me? Why Not were the strongest sounding new songs from the Hull Gig so looking forward to hearing the Album Versions
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Aug 14, 2019 13:34:40 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Aug 14, 2019 13:34:40 GMT -5
I wouldn’t rate Shockwave, The River or Once any higher than a 7 so fingers crossed One Of Us breaks the spell. One Of Us and Why Me? Why Not were the strongest sounding new songs from the Hull Gig so looking forward to hearing the Album Versions I’m pleased you liked Why Me Why Not, I’ve heard a few people say it wasn’t that great. It’s definitely a 7 too.
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