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Post by mkoasis on Nov 10, 2018 19:28:39 GMT -5
I've got it, I know what you need on this song: Mike Rowe playing along on the piano. Just a few tinkly notes, kind of like in Underneath the Sky.
There's a lot going on in this 2:04, some of it more fuzzy and unclear, but once you tighten up the song and it feels more focused, then you'll be ready to ask Mr. Rowe.
That said, please don't take my comment too seriously, I'm not much of a music writer or journalist, just someone who loves a lot of the same music, like we all do here.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2018 16:27:43 GMT -5
mkoasis Thanks for your comments ! I always appreciate constructive criticism and opinions/ideas from members, that's why I post my stuff on here. About this demo, maybe I'll re-record it next week.
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Post by funhouse on Nov 12, 2018 5:05:54 GMT -5
Do you have any lyrics written down? If so, feel free to post them here or send me a PM!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 12, 2018 10:32:50 GMT -5
Do you have any lyrics written down? If so, feel free to post them here or send me a PM! Sent it but these aren't definitive !
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Post by funhouse on Nov 13, 2018 4:16:58 GMT -5
Do you have any lyrics written down? If so, feel free to post them here or send me a PM! Sent it but these aren't definitive ! Listened to it again, and the lyrics painted a picture that fitted very well and made the song better!
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Post by keke on Nov 13, 2018 12:00:45 GMT -5
sounds great, i liked melody, i agree that it would be nice with piano adding. looking forward to listen re-record.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2018 17:59:36 GMT -5
funhouse keke Thanks for your comments ! I can't wait to find bandmates to fulfill the potential of these songs. The very few rehearsal I have done with my ex bands, I thought the majority of my songs sounded better with more instruments (especially Mrs. Brown, Sail Around The World and Tonight). I hope it'll happen soon, with gigs and all of that !
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2018 5:52:09 GMT -5
@supermario thanks for your comment, man ! Can't afford it right now, but will look deeper for these portable studios. Thanks for the recommendation.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 11, 2018 19:43:48 GMT -5
Ok, I have to say there'll be no more acoustic demos before I actually proper demos of it (with a decent sound, more instruments). I'm determined to make things go fast (also have to find a job) and record those demos + new ones as soon as possible. As soon as it's done, I'll share it with you of course !
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2019 7:29:02 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2019 3:17:29 GMT -5
Sent two of my demos to an indie label this morning !
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Post by keke on Apr 7, 2019 3:30:14 GMT -5
Sent two of my demos to an indie label this morning ! good luck mate, best wishes!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2019 3:48:56 GMT -5
Sent two of my demos to an indie label this morning ! good luck mate, best wishes! Thanks !
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2019 14:07:26 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2019 7:18:16 GMT -5
I got an answer. They prefer to hear more "complete" demos. Guess I have to find band members first. Anyway, keep voting
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Post by keke on Apr 8, 2019 11:43:16 GMT -5
I got an answer. They prefer to hear more "complete" demos. Guess I have to find band members first. Anyway, keep voting Good news! Glad to heard that.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2019 12:16:32 GMT -5
lubeckLube I got your message, I’d need your best 2 with no others in the link. Thought it might be useful for you to post them here for others that might be able to help too.
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Post by eva on Apr 8, 2019 16:48:28 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jul 16, 2019 16:15:20 GMT -5
I've been accepted for university in Lyon and will start in september. Right now I'm already looking for band members and will no doubt find some soon !
When it happens, I'll tell you and share with you (new) demos !
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2019 12:08:07 GMT -5
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Post by keke on Aug 10, 2019 12:32:07 GMT -5
i like it, a bit some mess during 0:22-032 ? weird, i was checking mtv unplugged 1996 now, it sounds like that version, not big fan of Ryan Adams version anyway. nice to see you still recording
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Post by Deleted on Oct 15, 2019 6:32:02 GMT -5
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Post by eva on Oct 15, 2019 7:18:29 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 15, 2019 8:21:13 GMT -5
Thank you for the tag lubeck I’ll listen when I get home from work. Hope it’ goes well and more importantly I’m really pleased you seem to be in a much better place right now Lube 😊
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