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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2016 11:25:23 GMT -5
Here it is:
Let me know what you think of it :-)
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Post by keke on May 9, 2016 14:08:18 GMT -5
it's getting better man I think these demos are big step forward for you, improving your talent and potential. i honestly like your voice and unfortunately i can't make professional comment but i liked the melody and theme, sounds great. also these little outros
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2016 14:53:58 GMT -5
it's getting better man I think these demos are big step forward for you, improving your talent and potential. i honestly like your voice and unfortunately i can't make professional comment but i liked the melody and theme, sounds great. also these little outros Thanks a lot, mate. Really appreciate your encouragement
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2016 15:30:45 GMT -5
Overall it is very listenable, but I wish I could tell what you are singing lyrically better. Also, maybe try mixing up how you play, or strum, verses in contrast to the chorus. You know, strum one harder than the other possibly.
Thanks for sharing.
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2016 15:39:06 GMT -5
Overall it is very listenable, but I wish I could tell what you are singing lyrically better. Also, maybe try mixing up how you play, or strum, verses in contrast to the chorus. You know, strum one harder than the other possibly. Thanks for sharing. Yes, should have played the verses softer or the chorus harder. Thanks for giving your opinion.
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Post by World71R on May 9, 2016 22:19:37 GMT -5
Nice job!
I like the melody and the transition from the verse to the chorus. I kind of felt that cool feeling you get when you listen to Oasis, The Smiths, or The Stone Roses when I listened to that, and I think if you really build upon what you got, you'll have something awesome on your hands.
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Post by morning_rain on May 10, 2016 2:47:24 GMT -5
Really enjoyed that! I think you need to sing in a more confident way, that would improve the feeling of the song.
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Post by Deleted on May 10, 2016 6:37:50 GMT -5
Thanks for all the good feedback and advices. I appreciate it :-)
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Post by Deleted on May 10, 2016 15:15:32 GMT -5
If anyone wants to give other feedbacks or advices, don't hesitate to ! :-)
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Post by Flatulence Panic on May 11, 2016 5:11:37 GMT -5
Feckin' grand!
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2016 9:12:26 GMT -5
Feckin' grand! Never watched this serie. Is it great ?
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Post by Flatulence Panic on May 11, 2016 14:06:38 GMT -5
Feckin' grand! Never watched this serie. Is it great ? It's feckin' grand !
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Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2016 11:06:11 GMT -5
Don't hesitate to share your opinion, thoughts, even the quickest. I'd appreciate it as I'm going to record some tunes for a kind of "EP" in a studio, in July. Thanks
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Post by keke on Jun 11, 2016 11:11:10 GMT -5
Don't hesitate to share your opinion, thoughts, even the quickest. I'd appreciate it as I'm going to record some tunes for a kind of "EP" in a studio, in July. Thanks Sounds great. Looking forward
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Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2016 11:15:14 GMT -5
Don't hesitate to share your opinion, thoughts, even the quickest. I'd appreciate it as I'm going to record some tunes for a kind of "EP" in a studio, in July. Thanks Sounds great. Looking forward Yes, great my stepmother, who is a professional violonist, would record it with me, and a friend drummer aswell
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Post by keke on Jun 11, 2016 11:18:12 GMT -5
Sounds great. Looking forward Yes, great my stepmother, who is a professional violonist, would record it with me, and a friend drummer aswell Wonderwall cover
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Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2016 11:46:23 GMT -5
Yes, great my stepmother, who is a professional violonist, would record it with me, and a friend drummer aswell Wonderwall cover Definitely (maybe) ahah
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